[identity profile] melodily.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] greatpoetry
On a platform, I heard someone call out your name:
No, Laetitia, no.
It wasn’t my train—the doors were closing,
but I rushed in, searching for your face.

But no Laetitia. No.
No one in that car could have been you,
but I rushed in, searching for your face:
no longer an infant. A woman now, blond, thirty-two.

No one in that car could have been you.
Laetitia-Marie was the name I had chosen.
No longer an infant. A woman now, blond, thirty-two:
I sometimes go months without remembering you.

Laetitia-Marie was the name I had chosen:
I was told not to look. Not to get attached—
I sometimes go months without remembering you.
Some griefs bless us that way, not asking much space.

I was told not to look. Not to get attached.
It wasn’t my train—the doors were closing.
Some griefs bless us that way, not asking much space.
On a platform, I heard someone calling your name.

Date: 2011-07-04 11:48 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-07-04 02:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wind-hover.livejournal.com
This is lovely.

Date: 2011-07-04 05:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cimeara.livejournal.com
What a perfect form for the content!

Date: 2011-07-04 06:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bright-ephemera.livejournal.com
Agreed. The repetition is perfect.

Date: 2011-07-15 03:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bloodrebel333.livejournal.com
Saving this.

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