[identity profile] elenbarathi.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] greatpoetry
Atavism

I was always afraid of Somes's Pond:
Not the little pond, by which the willow stands,
Where laughing boys catch alewives in their hands
In brown, bright shallows; but the one beyond.
There, where the frost makes all the birches burn
Yellow as cow-lilies, and the pale sky shines
Like a polished shell between black spruce and pines,
Some strange thing tracks us, turning where we turn.

You'll say I dreamed it, being the true daughter
Of those who in old times endured this dread.
Look! Where the lily-stems are showing red
A silent paddle moves below the water,
A sliding shape has stirred them like a breath;
Tall plumes surmount a painted mask of death.

~by Elinor Wylie

this is a wonderful sonnet

Date: 2012-10-20 01:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mirmusing.livejournal.com
so cleverly written that the rhyme is hidden subtly until you look back and see its effortless presence - what a marvelous share. M

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