Why Hello Sirs and Madams

[xxstaceyxx.livejournal.com]

Hi,
My poems aren't half as good as everyone elses, but I'll post them anyway. :o)

Searching

Pure like crystals
Glimmering with hope
Shadows cascaded
dulling beautiful color
you search my soul
nothing is found
tears collect in your eyes
guilt conquers this body
you look away

I just randomly wrote this when my cat was staring at me.
Tell me whatcha think.

Comments

[gleefulfreak.livejournal.com]

why, hello there! you might want to check the info for this community... it's for sharing the works of published writers only, not our own works. so don't feel like everyone on here writes better than you - some of us may not write at all! it's just that i think you can probably find a better community out there to post your own work. :)

[xxstaceyxx.livejournal.com]

oh man, thanks guys for telling me that. heh.
Alright. I'll post some cool published poems I come across then as well as search for another community.
<3

[lunar-endeavor.livejournal.com]

It's a small community. But you're welcome to post your own work in litsanon.