[identity profile] ghostofchance.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] greatpoetry
First, I would have her be beautiful,
and walking carefully upon my poetry
at the loneliest moment of an afternoon,
her hair still damp at the neck
from washing it. She should be wearing
a raincoat, an old one, dirty
from not having money enough for the cleaners.
She will take out her glasses, and there
in the bookstore, she will thumb
over my poems, then put the book back
upon its shelf. She will say to herself,
"For that kind of money, I can get
my raincoat cleaned." And she will.

Date: 2004-06-08 02:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] upatmidnight.livejournal.com
mmmmm, i like the quirky awkwardness of this piece...
the descriptive loathing made so beautiful...
odd...
warm...
real...

great share!

Date: 2004-06-09 04:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] upatmidnight.livejournal.com
well, i'm am going to look for that collection the next time i'm in the bookstore...thank you for this post...wonderful stuff indeed!

i like

Date: 2004-06-08 04:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] onekell.livejournal.com
the intimacy and self-deprecation of this satellite story.

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