oops

[finlayma84.livejournal.com]

It has been brought to my attention that the poem I posted was posted only a few days ago. Now I wouldn't want to be accused of being a copycat, so how about a little Cummings?

the moon is hiding in
her hair.
The
lily
of heaven
full of all dreams,
draws down.

cover her briefness in singing
close her with intricate faint birds
by daisies and twilights
Deepen her,

Recite
upon her
flesh
the rain's

pearls singly-whispering.

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[joseishijin.livejournal.com]

Lovely. ^_^