mark doty

Aug. 10th, 2004 09:15 am
[identity profile] maya3814.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] greatpoetry
Tiara
by Mark Doty


Peter died in a paper tiara
cut from a book of princess paper dolls;
he loved royalty, sashes

and jewels. I don't know,
he said, when he woke in the hospice,
I was watching the Bette Davis film festival

on Channel 57 and then—
At the wake, the tension broke
when someone guessed

the casket closed because
he was in there in a big wig
and heels, and someone said,

You know he's always late,
he probably isn't here yet—
he's still fixing his makeup.

And someone said he asked for it.
Asked for it—
when all he did was go down

into the salt tide
of wanting as much as he wanted,
giving himself over so drunk

or stoned it almost didn't matter who,
though they were beautiful,
stampeding into him in the simple,

ravishing music of their hurry.
I think heaven is perfect stasis
poised over the realms of desire,

where dreaming and waking men lie
on the grass while wet horses
roam among them, huge fragments

of the music we die into
in the body's paradise.
Sometimes we wake not knowing

how we came to lie here,
or who has crowned us with these temporary,
precious stones. And given

the world's perfectly turned shoulders,
the deep hollows blued by longing,
given the irreplaceable silk

of horses rippling in orchards,
fruit thundering and chiming down,
given the ordinary marvels of form

and gravity, what could he do,
what could any of us ever do
but ask for it.


i love that poem.
i was hoping someone in this community might be able to help me in my quest to find a poem... the only things i know about it are that it is i guess a love poem, and talks about wanting to make someone pancakes everyday. it was published in some poetry anthology of american poets. i know there isn't alot to go on, but if anyone remembers the poem please tell me who its by/what its called. thanks.

venturing a guess...

Date: 2004-08-10 03:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natelyswhore.livejournal.com
I Will Make You Pancakes

I will make you pancakes
And bring you coffee
And place a rose on your table
If you'll only stay the night

If you spend a week with me
We'll wine and dine and dance
And presents every day I'll bring you
And I'll tell you stories that make you laugh

I'll plant a flower garden just for you
With a center fountain in your honor
And daily birds will come and sing to you
If a year with me you'll spare

If with me for life you'll pledge
I'll make our journey an adventure
So our hearts will fly as high as clouds on a summer day
And we'll know joy others have only dreamed

But for now _ will you just stay the night
If you do I'll wake you gently
Then softly kiss the sleep from your eyes
And you will begin your morning with love

And I'll make you pancakes


William G. Carrington


Date: 2004-08-12 02:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hellomdolly.livejournal.com
Mark Doty is my favorite poet in the whole world. He's basically my favorite man in the entire world. He's amazing.

Thank you for posting that. Which book is it from?

Re: gotta love mark

Date: 2004-08-12 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hellomdolly.livejournal.com
i'm in love with atlantis, but right now i'm in the middle of still life with oysters and lemon, and it's a really hard read, but the man is BRILLIANT. every word is perfect, and it's blowing my mind.

sweet machine, eh? hmmm... i might have to dig it back out just cuz you said that. :)

a documentary??

Re:

Date: 2004-08-13 04:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hellomdolly.livejournal.com
yeah, and the harder i try to imitate doty, the worse it ends up. it's maddening.

do you?

Re:

Date: 2004-08-13 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hellomdolly.livejournal.com
i know exactly what you mean. i would love to read some of your stuff!

Re:

Date: 2004-08-15 06:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hellomdolly.livejournal.com
definitely do that! you can email it to me (hellomdolly@yahoo.com)

i'm out of town right now, but i'll be checking when i can. i'll be back on thrusday.

hopefully then i can send stuff your way also.

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