Coat, Vicki Feaver

[ayeartoolate.livejournal.com]

Sometimes I have wanted
to throw you off
like a heavy coat.

Sometimes I have said
you would not let me
breathe or move.

But now that I am free
to choose light clothes
or none at all

I feel the cold
and all the time I think
how warm it used to be.

Comments

[fermina.livejournal.com]

Thank you for posting this.

[streaks.livejournal.com]

WHOA JAYME AND ANDREW
IT'S LIKE THE TWILIGHT ZONG

hay jayme thanks for writing back ;)

[fermina.livejournal.com]

Andrew? As in ex-Andrew?

I got your letter. I will write back!

I'm horribly slow about such things, but I promise by Monday I'll have somethnig in the mail.

I really enjoyed it, btw. Thanks for writing.

[streaks.livejournal.com]

haha yeah! the posting of this poem might have to do with me. i'm a bad ex-girlfriend :(

oh i feel special. i was just teasing, you don't really have to write back. your letters will probably put mine to shame. <3

[fermina.livejournal.com]

Oh gawd, honey, I'm sure my letters will be total crap, but I'm going to send them to you anyway, because I wouldn't mind receiving total crap from you and I'm hoping it works both ways.

Livvy is soooooooooo cute.

I also like the high heel cutout. Damn cool.

I know you were teasing, but writing you back is seriously on my list of things to do. I'm camping this weekend. I intend to catch up on my correspondence at night in the tent. :c)

Beautiful

[bitter-phoenix.livejournal.com]

That's so odd, this is exactly what I needed to hear. It makes me feel not quite so alone in my decision-making. I really appreciate this. it's beautifully written. I love it.