[identity profile] summerstarlight.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] greatpoetry
she being Brand

-new;and you
know consequently a
little stiff i was
careful of her and(having

thoroughly oiled the universal
joint tested my gas felt of
her radiator made sure her springs were O.

K.)i went right to it flooded-the-carburetor cranked her

up,slipped the
clutch(and then somehow got into reverse she
kicked what
the hell)next
minute i was back in neutral tried and

again slo-wly;bare,ly nudg. ing(my

lev-er Right-
oh and her gears being in
A 1 shape passed
from low through
second-in-to-high like
greasedlightning)just as we turned the corner of Divinity

avenue i touched the accelerator and give

her the juice,good

(it

was the first ride and believe i we was
happy to see how nice she acted right up to
the last minute coming back down by the Public
Gardens i slammed on

the
internalexpanding
&
externalcontracting
brakes Bothatonce and

brought allofher tremB
-ling
to a:dead.

stand-
;Still)

Date: 2004-08-21 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] we-are-pliable.livejournal.com
Whoa. I wish I hadn't been in an office when I read that.

Date: 2004-08-22 04:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] undertoe.livejournal.com
Oh how I do love the work of cummings... So amazing and breathtakingly original. Quite the beautiful piece here. Do you know which book it is out of by chance?

Date: 2004-08-22 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pierogie101.livejournal.com
i like it!

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