[identity profile] emyuhlie.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] greatpoetry
hey, guys, i need a favor. a friend of mine needs a poem to quote for his girlfriend's christmas present...something about stars, or the uniqueness of stars or someone...you know, something all romantical like that.

and the poem, as promised.


The Brawl
-Federico Garcia Lorca

Half-down the ravine the curving knives
From Albacete town
With rival bloods made beautiful
Like fishes flash around.

A hard flat light of playing card
Against the bitter green
Outlines the horsemen in profile
And horses wild and mean.

There in the crown of an olive tree
Two ancient women bawl.
The bull of the brawl rears up his head
And starts to climb the walls.

Dark angels were bringing handkerchiefs
And melted snow as aids;
Dark angels with great curving wings
Of Albacete blades.

Juan Antonio from Montilla town
Rolls down the slope, life fled,
His body marked with iris blooms,
His brow pomegranate red,
Then mounts a cross of fire and takes
The highroad of the dead.

The judge comes down through the olive grove,
With a Civil Guard along.
The blood slipper down begins to moan
A noiseless serpent song.

Gentlemen, you who keep the law,
It’s a story old and plain:
Four Romans here come down to death,
Five Carthaginians slain.

The afternoon with fig trees wild
And murmurs touched with heat
Upon the horsemen’s wounded thighs
Falls fainting in defeat.

And angels in black were flying around
In the deepening twilight air,
Angels with hearts of olive oil
And long, long braids of hair.

Date: 2004-12-09 02:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] omarius.livejournal.com
A bit of Shakespeare we meant to use in our wedding (and we forgot!) from Hamlet Act ii, scene 2:

Doubt thou the stars are fire;
Doubt that the sun doth move;
Doubt truth to be a liar;
But never doubt I love.

Date: 2004-12-09 03:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sylphbranching.livejournal.com
The only poem featuring stars that comes to mind is "the more loving one" by Auden, but it's not exactly romantic. http://www.poets.org/poems/poems.cfm?prmID=1396

he could try doing a search for stars poems on the above site, or writing his own.
good luck!

Date: 2004-12-09 03:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lunar-endeavor.livejournal.com
Funny that nearly all the poems I have about stars are highly unromantic. "Getting at Stars" by Simon Armitage is my favorite, but it's rather bleak. Ditto for Robinson Jeffers' "The Great Explosion".

Date: 2004-12-09 03:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] omarius.livejournal.com
I wrote a celestially-conceited love poem once, but in this case it was a black hole.

(That sounds bad! The poem - er, well, the idea expressed in the poem wasn't.)

Date: 2004-12-09 04:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lunar-endeavor.livejournal.com
Hehe. I wrote an out-of-love poem with celestial motifs. (Stars and singularities and auroras, oh my!)

Date: 2004-12-09 03:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joseishijin.livejournal.com
It's a bit long, but you can't go wrong with Pablo Neruda (forgive me, I don't know the translator):

Here I Love You

Here I love you.
In the dark pines the wind disentangles itself.
The moon glows like phosphorous on the vagrant waters.
Days, all one kind, go chasing each other.

The snow unfurls in dancing figures.
A silver gull slips down from the west.
Sometimes a sail. High, high stars.

Oh the black cross of a ship.
Alone.
Sometimes I get up early and even my soul is wet.
Far away the sea sounds and resounds.
This is a port.
Here I love you.

Here I love you and the horizon hides you in vain.
I love you still among these cold things.
Sometimes my kisses go on those heavy vessels
that cross the sea towards no arrival.
I see myself forgotten like those old anchors.
The piers sadden when the afternoon moors there.
My life grows tired, hungry to no purpose.
I love what I do not have. You are so far.
My loathing wrestles with the slow twilights.
But night comes and starts to sing to me.

The moon turns its clockwork dream.
The biggest stars look at me with your eyes.
And as I love you, the pines in the wind
want to sing your name with their leaves of wire.

Date: 2004-12-10 05:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joseishijin.livejournal.com
^___________^

Neruda's poems are sublime.

Date: 2004-12-09 04:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nattyleedread.livejournal.com
this has nothing to do with poetry (well, perhaps it does) but I'm glad someone else loves debussy, and claire de lune specifically...

Date: 2004-12-09 04:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nattyleedread.livejournal.com
I am also deeply in love with the God of evokative piano, him and Gershwin both bring me to appreciative tears... :)

Date: 2004-12-09 06:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] undertoe.livejournal.com
http://www.livejournal.com/users/undertoe/38096.html Not exactly famous, but very applicable to what you were asking... heh.

Date: 2004-12-09 03:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkbarde.livejournal.com
"silently if, out of not knowable"
ee cummings

silently if, out of not knowable
night's utmost nothing,wanders a little guess
(only which is this world)more my life does
not leap than with the mystery your smile
sings or if(spiralling as luminous
they climb oblivion)voices who are dreams,
less into heaven certainly earth swims
than each my deeper death becomes your kiss
losing through you what seemed myself,i find
selves unimaginably mine;beyond
sorrow's own joys and hoping's very fears
yours is the light by which my spirit's born:
yours is the darkness of my soul's return
-you are my sun,my moon,and all my stars


And here's the whole Shakespeare quote that someone else had posted:

Doubt thou the stars are fire; doubt that the sun doth move; doubt truth to be a liar;
but never doubt I love you.
I love thee, I love but thee with a love that shall not die.
Till the sun grows cold and the
stars grow old.


Lord Byron

CLXXIII. "She walks in beauty, like the night"

SHE walks in beauty, like the night
Of cloudless climes and starry skies,
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meets in her aspect and her eyes;
Thus mellow'd to that tender light
Which Heaven to gaudy day denies.

One shade the more, one ray the less,
Had half impair'd the nameless grace
Which waves in every raven tress
Or softly lightens o'er her face,
Where thoughts serenely sweet express
How pure, how dear their dwelling-place.

And on that cheek and o'er that brow
So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,
The smiles that win, the tints that glow,
But tell of days in goodness spent,—
A mind at peace with all below,
A heart whose love is innocent.


D.H. Lawrence
In a Boat
From Amores, 1916.



See the stars, love,
In the water much clearer and brighter
Than those above us, and whiter,
Like nenuphars.


Star-shadows shine, love,
How many stars in your bowl?
How many shadows in your soul,
Only mine, love, mine?


When I move the oars, love,
See how the stars are tossed,
Distorted, the brightest lost.
-- So that bright one of yours, love.

The poor waters spill

The stars, waters broken, forsaken.
-- The heavens are not shaken, you say, love,
Its stars stand still.


There, did you see
That spark fly up at us; even
Stars are not safe in heaven.
-- What of yours, then, love, yours?


What then, love, if soon
Your light be tossed over a wave?
Will you count the darkness a grave,
And swoon, love, swoon?

Date: 2004-12-10 04:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] undertoe.livejournal.com
Thanks!!! :D You should check out my journal if you want to read more ;)

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