Paul Kelly: Summer Rain

[brendanobrien.livejournal.com]

SUMMER RAIN

She comes and goes, like summer rain.
I wait all day for summer rain.
And when she comes, I smile again.
She cools my brain, like summer rain.

She'll change your plans like summer rain.
I raise my arms to summer rain.
I lift my head and taste again.
The sweet, sweet drops of summer rain.

She's warm, she's fresh like summer rain.
She comes in a rush, like summer rain.
And when she comes she makes a change.
I'll wait all day for summer rain.

.....Paul Kelly

Comments

[aria-muse.livejournal.com]

i'm in the basement
you're in the sky
i'm in the basement, baby
drop on by

[ravengirl.livejournal.com]

It's not why you're running
It's where you're going
It's not what you're dreaming
But what you're gonna do

It's not where you're born
It's where you belong
It's not how weak
But what will make you strong

[brendanobrien.livejournal.com]

what a strange reply...if you tell me that is something else Paul wrote and I didn't recognise it, I'll be very embarrassed...

[ravengirl.livejournal.com]

when you posted the lyric, the song that went through my mind is a U2 tune by the same name. i responded to aria muse because they posted a bit of a different lyric. :)

oh, okay...

[brendanobrien.livejournal.com]

that's alright...I just wanted to know the nature of the response...maybe I'll have to look into that song now.

[kevincarter.livejournal.com]

CHOCOLATE RAIN

She comes and goes, like chocolate rain.
I wait all day for chocolate rain.
And when she comes, I smile again.
She cools my brain, like chocolate rain.

She'll change your plans like chocolate rain.
I raise my arms to chocolate rain.
I lift my head and taste again.
The sweet, sweet drops of chocolate rain.

She's warm, she's fresh like chocolate rain.
She comes in a rush, like chocolate rain.
And when she comes she makes a change.
I'll wait all day for chocolate rain.

.....Tay Zonday

[moireach.livejournal.com]

Where was this published?

[brendanobrien.livejournal.com]

Paul Kelly is a musician from Melbourne since the 1970s, and he is reknowned in this country. A great songwriter, and therefore poet...his lyrics are now studied by our year 12 students as part of their English assessment.

Just beautiful.

[moireach.livejournal.com]

A great songwriter, and therefore poet

Well, there are many MANY people who'd disagree with you on that point.... but aside from that, this community only allows material by published poets, not musicians. In the future, please limit your posts to poems, not song lyrics.

[mindfulness.livejournal.com]

Perhaps that definition should be on the profile page of the community, along with no self-publishing?

I think there are many very old poems that would be considered songs if they were released now, but the music has been lost.

I see Paul Kelly as much a poet as a musician, but I might be biased as I'm a musician and a poet and would hate to see my work limited to one or the other. ()

[mindfulness.livejournal.com]

I am not an html coder however.

[brendanobrien.livejournal.com]

I have to agree with you there...and many songwriters write poetry that is then turned into songs, often by themselves but many times by other musicians. Plenty of old Australian poems (AB 'Banjo' Paterson and Henry Lawson, just to name a couple) have been "songified" over the years.

...and even without the music, Summer Rain is a beautiful poem.

[chad-etc.livejournal.com]

I hate the internet, because all I can think of is "chocolate rain".

[brendanobrien.livejournal.com]

This Chocolate rain is going to haunt me...I've never heard of it before...ever.

[babbss.livejournal.com]

LOL.

Aw, I'm sorry about that. *pats*